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Re: Poetry - just poetry ....

Bacon is red
Violets are blue
I need to kiss
Sizzling you



Poetry is hard
Bacon smile
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bleary eyes
foggy moon
clouded confusions - you

to take your hand
have you pirouette into my arms
real or imagined - true
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There are always layers of perception and
individual frames of reality - all of which
makes poetry so beguiling. Well done, Dave!

The Journey

One day you finally knew
what you had to do, and began,
though the voices around you
kept shouting
their bad advice --
though the whole house
began to tremble
and you felt the old tug
at your ankles.
"Mend my life!"
each voice cried.
But you didn't stop.
You knew what you had to do,
though the wind pried
with its stiff fingers
at the very foundations,
though their melancholy
was terrible.
It was already late
enough, and a wild night,
and the road full of fallen
branches and stones.
But little by little,
as you left their voices behind,
the stars began to burn
through the sheets of clouds,
and there was a new voice
which you slowly
recognized as your own,
that kept you company
as you strode deeper and deeper
into the world,
determined to do
the only thing you could do --
determined to save
the only life you could save.

-Mary Oliver
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Futility

Move him into the sun -
Gently its touch awoke him once,
At home, whispering of fields unsown.
Always it woke him, even in France,
Until this morning and this snow.
If anything might rouse him now
The kind old sun will know.

Think how it wakes the seeds, -
Woke, once, the clays of a cold star.
Are limbs, so dear-achieved, are sides,
Full-nerved - still warm - too hard to stir?
Was it for this the clay grew tall?
- O what made fatuous sunbeams toil
To break earth's sleep at all?



by Wilfred Owen
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Wilfred Owen questions how nature can create life but then
allow it to be wasted. A cry felt by all who experience loss --
ergo the meaning of the title.
Sadly, the talented, young poet's life itself was cut short - leaving a
true void in the literary world.

All Nature seems at work. Slugs leave their lair—
The bees are stirring—birds are on the wing—
And Winter slumbering in the open air,
Wears on his smiling face a dream of Spring!
And I the while, the sole unbusy thing,
Nor honey make, nor pair, nor build, nor sing.

Yet well I ken the banks where amaranths blow,
Have traced the fount whence streams of nectar flow.
Bloom, O ye amaranths! bloom for whom ye may,
For me ye bloom not! Glide, rich streams, away!
With lips unbrightened, wreathless brow, I stroll:
And would you learn the spells that drowse my soul?
Work without Hope draws nectar in a sieve,
And Hope without an object cannot live.

-Samuel Taylor Coleridge
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My understanding is it is one of Wilfred's War Poem's (WW1)
A desperate loss of one of his brothers in arms hence the France reference (Similar to "In Flanders fields" just over the border in Belgium)

"Was it for this the clay grew tall?"

Yet more questioning of Man's inhumanity to Man

I thought it appropriate given the time of year and is not meant to cause offense over any border given this is the WCG.

It's still Futility whichever side you find yourself on.

He himself was killed in the last days of WW1. One week before the Armistice
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"Yet more questioning of Man's inhumanity to Man"

Unfortunately, indifference is the essence of inhumanity.

The poet's heart expresses his soul. His war poems reveal
keen sensitivity to all the suffering he experienced.
The words and the pain will echo forever.


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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DXP1oLtPyDA

Once used the lyrics/poem in my sig for well over a month changing every day biggrin

I love Mr Hannon's work

Particularly https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BsvMca0xG0c as you would expect
and https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zPPi58K6wZs

If you click on no other click on this

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZGbhXoaGL4U


Those lyrics - that poem

I'm the darkness in the light
I'm the leftness in the right
I'm the rightness in the wrong
I'm the shortness in the long
I'm the goodness in the bad
I'm the saneness in the mad
I'm the sadness in the joy
I'm the gin in the gin soaked boy
The gin soaked boy

I'm the ghost in the machine
I'm the genius in the gene
I'm the beauty in the beast
I'm the sunset in the east
I'm the ruby in the dust
I'm the trust in the mistrust
I'm the Trojan horse in Troy
I'm the gin in the gin soaked boy
The gin soaked boy

I'm the tiger's empty cage
I'm the mystery's final page
I'm the stranger's lonely glance
I'm the hero's only chance
I'm the undiscovered land
I'm the single grain of sand
I'm the Christmas morning toy
I'm the gin in the gin soaked boy
The gin soaked boy

I'm the world you'll never see
I'm the slave you'll never free
I'm the truth you'll never know
I'm the place you'll never go
I'm the sound you'll never hear
I'm the course you'll never steer
I'm the will you'll not destroy
I'm the gin in the gin soaked boy
Yeah, the gin soaked boy

I'm the half truth in the lie
I'm the why not in the why
I'm the last roll in the die
I'm the old school in the tie
I'm the spirit in the sky
I'm the catcher in the rye
I'm the twinkle in her eye
I'm Jeff Goldblum in "The Fly"
Well, who am I?



This pair always make me wonder

I'm the beauty in the beast
I'm the sunset in the east

For the sake of the rhyme or to continue the out of sorts out of stepness of the rest of the lyrics ?? Or does he just kick himself every now and again and go "Oh no what was I thinking"

I should let it go smile
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Everyone must be who they are. Sensibilities cannot be separate -
rooted in the creative process to help us imagine and dream.
That's what makes one a great writer.
Hannon's pulse lies in his lyrics and those who relate can easily
travel along. Thanks for sharing, Dave!


All Nature seems at work. Slugs leave their lair€”-
The bees are stirring- €”birds are on the wing-
And Winter slumbering in the open air,
Wears on his smiling face a dream of Spring!
And I the while, the sole unbusy thing,
Nor honey make, nor pair, nor build, nor sing.

Yet well I ken the banks where amaranths blow,
Have traced the fount whence streams of nectar flow.
Bloom, O ye amaranths! bloom for whom ye may,
For me ye bloom not! Glide, rich streams, away!
With lips unbrightened, wreathless brow, I stroll:
And would you learn the spells that drowse my soul?
Work without Hope draws nectar in a sieve,
And Hope without an object cannot live.

-Samuel Taylor Coleridge
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Wind chill factor is now 20*F, so I will think warm thoughts.

Spring is like a perhaps hand
E. E. Cummings, 1894 - 1962


Spring is like a perhaps hand
(which comes carefully
out of Nowhere)arranging
a window,into which people look(while
people stare
arranging and changing placing
carefully there a strange
thing and a known thing here)and

changing everything carefully

spring is like a perhaps
Hand in a window
(carefully to
and fro moving New and
Old things,while
people stare carefully
moving a perhaps
fraction of flower here placing
an inch of air there)and

without breaking anything.
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