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Re: Poetry - just poetry ....

"Promise To Try"

Little girl don't you forget her face
Laughing away your tears
When she was the one who felt all the pain

Little girl never forget her eyes
Keep them alive inside
I promise to try -- it's not the same

Keep your head held high -- ride like the wind
Never look behind, life isn't fair
That's what you said, so I try not to care

Little girl don't run away so fast
I think you forgot to kiss -- kiss her goodbye

Will she see me cry when I stumble and fall
Does she hear my voice in the night when I call
Wipe away all your tears, it's gonna be all right

I fought to be so strong, I guess you knew
I was afraid you'd go away, too

Little girl you've got to forget the past
And learn to forgive me
I promise to try -- but it feels like a lie

Don't let memory play games with your mind
She's a faded smile frozen in time
I'm still hanging on -- but I'm doing it wrong
Can't kiss her goodbye -- but I promise to try
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Sometimes
LOL
Is the saddest thing of all
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We look before and after, And pine for what is not; Our sincerest laughter
With some pain is fraught; Our sweetest songs are those that tell of
saddest thought.

-Percy Bysshe Shelley
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Percy says it best

I'm going to enrol in my local new creative writing course for next term Beverley....finally

It will be run by http://www.mariapreston.co.uk/

Compelled
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That's great, Dave! I'm certain it will both enhance and fulfill
your creative abilities. I would be pleased to hear how you fare
at the least. If not, would be happy some day to read your
published work :) Enjoy each and every step!

"There is a place where the sidewalk ends
And before the street begins,
And there the grass grows soft and white,
And there the sun burns crimson bright,
And there the moon-bird rests from his flight
To cool in the peppermint wind.
Let us leave this place where the smoke blows black
And the dark street winds and bends.
Past the pits where the asphalt flowers grow
We shall walk with a walk that is measured and slow
And watch where the chalk-white arrows go
To the place where the sidewalk ends."
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ever wider
clouds reflected
intersecting circles,
circles intersecting,
intersecting circles,
circles
ruined by a duck's wake
intersecting
circles intersecting
intercircles secting
the splosh of the rain
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Life is like ripples in a pond
Mimicking the circle of life
As in the mind’s eye reveals
Begins small until the circle
Grows wider – wider still
Until the ripples fade away
Like the years of lost innocence
Never to be found again
Though if we but try
To conjure memories
Can be remembered
Leaving us to mourn
Our yesterdays
What could have been
Should have been
But will never be
So instead – we must smile
Perhaps shed a tear
Laugh about what was
Because in the end
Coming full circle
Means we have lived
And loved as if tomorrow
Will never come
As the ripples fade away.
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It was mesmerising, as the steam coiled off the top of my coffee at Tebay Service Station on the M6. Every time I stop there it is raining.

There's a shallow pond right outside window backed by the Cumbrian Mountains. No wind to ruffle the surface. Just the pitter-patter of the rain skittering across it's surface.

I tried, and mostly failed, to paint that picture in a few words. The incessant speed they were written across the pond and disappeared. Metronomic.

But yes

The reason for putting fingertips to keyboard was the allegory to relationships.

2 drops side by side, an explosive instant in time.
That growing personality
Meeting each other
Growing together
Bumping into each other
but just at the interface of those ripples
Never the whole circle
Ripples that continue to travel out seemingly unaffected by the interaction with the other
To fade away
To be replaced again and again
By 2 more unknowing explosive drops

I was transfixed smile
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Well expressed, Dave.

Nature's tears bouncing off the window
Separately forming - then melding
Only to slip away again - gives sense to seeking
and reaching for another not yet arrived.

“The rain to the wind said,
You push and I'll pelt.'
They so smote the garden bed
That the flowers actually knelt,
And lay lodged--though not dead.
I know how the flowers felt.”

― Robert Frost
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It Rains

it rains
it is far from what i guess

the road has become
one empty
platform

people run away
and then it makes me
really happy

it rains
and those who are afraid of the water
are separated from those
who have no fears

of getting wet and of being alone
of filling an empty street and be counted as
an ostrich

it rains
and the room shall be filled with people
of runaways
who want shelter

it rains and people get divided
and people know each other

and people make decisions
and the rain makes the sound

there is sorrow
but no one cares to listen
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